Lets to Visit Ciputra Waterpark
 

          Lets to visit ciputra waterpark because you can get discount 50% and ciputra waterpark has many facilities for have fun and you may brought your own food there.
 

You can get 50%
          You can get discount 50% if you visit to ciputra waterpark beginning 25 may until 25 june 2010. The cost to one ticket is 60.000 rupiahs and also one ticket can use for maximal 5 person.
 

Ciputra waterpark has many facilities.
          Ciputra waterpark has many facilities to have fun. You don’t need pay to benefit from facilities because its free. In there you can swim, flying fox, playing water and etc.
 

You may brought your own food.
          You may brought your own food there. Usually if we to visit ciputra waterpark we may not brought your own food there but when 25 May 2010 until 25 June 2010 we may brought your own food there.
 

          During the periode of promotion at 25 May 2010 until 25 June 2010 you can get discount 50% as well as you can get to benefit from that facilities in ciputra waterpark. In addition to you may brought your own foods without buy in there.

Fashion is Very Important
Argumentative essay

         Fashion is Very Important for human. cause fashion is first and foremost a social statement, it may also signal a more inclusive personality,fashion as a means to attract certain type of person.

• Statement supporting sentence: For teen,fashion is first and foremost a social statement. It is an outward means of expression to their peers and the rest of the world.

• Identity supporting sentence: Fashion also provides teenagers a sense of identity by signaling which "grouping" they belong to (punk,goth,etc). It may also signal a more dependent or inclusive personality.

• Attraction supporting sentence: Teen can be extremely conscious about overall image when it comes sexual attraction. They will often exploit fashion as a means to attract a certain type of person.

I agree if fashion is very important. My reason:
Fashion is very important for appearance, but in character have to be flexible. That way also I meaning, the meaning of fashion to myself. Such as Flexible here is fashion,shall accomodate the situation and the condition. Do not have to follow is samely precisely because not yet of course to according.

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How to Write a Five-Paragraph Essay

An essay is a literary composition that expresses a certain idea, claim, or concept and backs it up with supporting statements. It will follow a logical pattern, to include an introductory paragraph (make the claim), a body (support), and a conclusion (summary of statements and support). English and Literature teachers use them on a regular basis, but essays are also a test tool used commonly in the social sciences, and even in math and science class.

Of course, essays play a big role in the college application process, as well. In short, there's just no avoiding essays, as long as you're in school!

Luckily, you can learn to craft a great essay if you can follow the standard pattern and write in a clear and organized manner.

Introduction 

The introduction is the first paragraph in your essay, and it should accomplish a few specific goals.

1. Capture the reader's interest

It's a good idea to start your essay with a really interesting statement, in order to pique the reader's interest.

Avoid starting out with a boring line like

"In this essay I will explain why Rosa Parks was an important figure."

Instead, try something like

"A Michigan museum recently paid $492,000 for an old, dilapidated bus from Montgomery, Alabama."

The second sentence sounds much more interesting, doesn't it? It would encourage most people to keep on reading.

2. Introduce the topic

The next few sentences should explain your first statement, and prepare the reader for your thesis statement.

"The old yellow bus was reported to be the very one that sparked the civil rights movement, when a young woman named Rosa Parks..."

3. Make a claim or express your opinion in a thesis sentence.

Your thesis sentence should provide your specific assertion and convey clearly your point of view.

"In refusing to surrender her seat to a white man, Rosa Parks inspired a courageous freedom movement that lives on, even today."  

Body

The body of the essay will include three paragraphs, each limited to one main idea that supports your thesis. You should state your idea, then back it up with two or three sentences of evidence or examples.

Example of a main idea:

"It took incredible courage for an African American woman to make such a bold stance in 1955 Alabama."

Offer evidence to support this statement:

"This act took place in an era when African Americans could be arrested and face severe retribution for comitting the most trivial acts of defiance."

Include a few more supporting statements with further evidence, then use transition words to lead to the following paragraph.

Sample transition words:

moreover
in fact
on the whole
furthermore
as a result
simply put
for this reason
similarly
likewise
it follows that
naturally
by comparison
surely
yet

The fifth paragraph will be your conclusion. 

Conclusion

The final paragraph will summarize your main points and re-assert your main claim. It should point out your main points, but should not repeat specific examples.

Once you complete the first draft of your essay, it's a good idea to re-visit the thesis statement in your first paragraph. Read your essay to see if it flows well.

You might find that the supporting paragraphs are strong, but they don't address the exact focus of your thesis. Simply re-write your thesis sentence to fit your body and summary more exactly.

By doing this, you will ensure that every sentence in your essay supports, proves, or reflects your thesis.

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